Some people think that the increase in international travel has a negative impact on the environment and should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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, it is argued that since international travelling negatively affects the environment, it should be limited.

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I believe that reducing international

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lower green gases emissions, I believe

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is not the best

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to tackle pollution-related issues.

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with, restricting international

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will affect

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negatively.

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is because many

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live far away from their homes and their families,

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air travelling is the only

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for them to come back home. A person who lives abroad enjoys the idea of having the chance to catch a flight and come back home whenever needed. If

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were deprived of the possibility to do so, they would certainly feel anxious and miserable, and they will probably develop negative feelings

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the government.

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might lead to protests and strikes against the Administration and its decision.

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, a limitation in

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will affect some countries’ economies in a negative

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.

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is because a majority of these countries’ incomes are tourism-related,

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preventing

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from travelling abroad would cause consistent losses to those nations since those places can only reach by plane. If governments cut international flights, reaching those islands would be impossible,

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happened during the Covid-19 pandemic.

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damaged undoubtedly the local economies, and cause

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crisis. To conclude,

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limiting international commuting will benefit the environment, it will have negative effects on

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’s happiness and most countries’ economies.

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represents the best

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to deal with climate change, and that alternative solutions must be explored.