in the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will able to read everything, they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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We live in an age where everything we use and consume is digital and somehow dependent on technology.

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has caused a lot of speculation in literary circles that print media namely newspapers and books is a dying industry.

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, everything will be digitalized and available at no cost in

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future. Herein, I present my case on disagreeing with

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thought. There is no question that access to all the information we ever need is at our fingertips, but reading a paper or a book on screen

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with a lot of concerns and drawbacks.

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, it impacts our health negatively, like there is a growing number of the public who are wearing eyeglasses from a young age because of constantly looking at a blue screen.

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, it

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all

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social groups, not everyone in

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world is technology savvy,

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are many people who just cannot catch up with all the advancements in the industry.

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, it is not cost-effective, the cost incurred to buy a book is very minimal when compared to the expenditure a person incurs for an internet connection.

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, there are many places in

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world where there is no electricity available

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forget the internet connection.

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, it’s a just matter of choice for some.

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, a person should be given a choice if he wants to read an eBook or a hard copybook. In conclusion, regardless of the changes in the way a literary piece is available to the public, there will be many people who cherish the idea of reading from a hard copy and paper.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

270 words

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Digital content
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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will able to read everything, they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The education of young people is the main priority in countries around the world. Some people believe that educating adults who cannot read or write is essential for the society and more funding should be made available for it. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public.Why is this happening?Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money.