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Band 4

Scientific developments even farming always bring major benefits. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays ,scientific
researches
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 influenced
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all fields even farming.It has been suggested that the manufactured crops could inflict harm on nature. In my opinion, cultivating in
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 way under control can boost
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agriculture. It is my view that searching on plant major has a numerous positive effect on eatable plants in order to
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 programs will help to produce some fruit and
vegtable
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vegetable
vegetables
 on a large scale include peach,
whatermelon
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watermelon
,orange and so on,
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, the taste of products can be
infuenced
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influenced
 too. they become more tasty, aromatic and watery. there is another significant point, scientists
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believe
utilizing
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 of chemical fertilizers will be reduced by the recent developments. From environmental and medical perspectives, pesticides are a threat to humans and animals, in order
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, natural pesticides
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 as a
renge
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range
 of insects are replaced by dangerous poisons
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 economic viewpoint, the countries with modern agriculture benefit from several recruitment opportunities.
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, some people claim that modification in farming crops can eliminate the
nuture
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nurture
 cycle balance. They firmly insist that vegetables should grow in
wild
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 way. From their point of view altering the plant growth and
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 their feature is more likely to extinction
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 special species.
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, I do not find
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 argument convincing as these scientists who work in booster research
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 theoretical education are aware
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 subject and cater for the issue
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 start the
developmants
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development
developments
 program. In conclusion, I completely agree with
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 idea about farming by cooperating with science because they can produce
fruite
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fruit
fruits
 with higher duality and
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 of pesticides. Economic is grown by
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 system too.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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