“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?

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problem prevention is more important than cure

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the high cost of medical experiments and treatment, so preventive intervention could be the one option.

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, I totally agree with the statement

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the cost-effectiveness and improving the healthy lifestyle to increase the quality of life. In my opinion, the pandemic of COVID-19 makes people

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face many

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problems related to the

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and symptoms.

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, a group of clients with COVID-19 and hypertension diagnosis in Indonesia should be careful during

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outbreak.

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, they include the high-risk group with comorbidity.

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there is no restlessness, dyspnea or other symptoms, they should stay at home, use a face mask

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always wash their hand before meals and contact the public as prevention efforts.

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, it is very essential to deal with

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strategy in order to save money. The second reason is that the prevention could lead to a high quality of life particularly for elder people and children since they have low immunity.

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, my mother with asthma lives in a rural area in Pasuruan

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the hospital and the public

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centre.

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, the number of drugs is limited, even though some pharmacology therapies are available .

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, the condition could be prevented by avoiding allergens,

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air, and staying warm at home. In conclusion, preventing a disease or an illness is much more important than anything

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treating an exacerbation is much more difficult, especially for a high-risk group.

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to improving community

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state.

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