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Do you know what separates humans from other living beings?

#humans #beings
Curiosity. Humans are curious. We question a lot. We are the ones who challenge the status quo of existing rules and strive to build/produce something better.
Such
 curiosity & efforts have promised us a life where electronic
devices
 & machines will probably become our best
friend
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. Yes, you read it correctly the vision to make machines smart enough to reduce human labour to almost nil. The idea of
inter-connected
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devices
 where the
devices
 are smart enough to share information with us,
to
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cloud based
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 applications and to each other (device to device). Smart
devices
 or “Connected
devices
 ” as they are commonly called, are designed in
such
 a way that they capture and utilize every bit of data
which
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 you share or use in everyday life. And these
devices
 will use
this
 data to interact with you on
daily
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 basis and complete tasks.
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