Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Other say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A lot of people do not see the need of being
multibilingual
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multilingual
unless a need arose,
for
instance
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an
opportunity
to relocate to another nation, a great job offer in another country,
business
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a business
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opportunity
or even travelling for leisure. Learning another language sounds a bit hectic especially if you are not going to use it, but who knows, life is just unpredictable,
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much better to have
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of
differnt
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different
languages
than
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completly
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completely
blank, one might need it in the near future. I think schools should include in their curriculum basic learning of different
languages
from different
nations
as a preparation for their future, especially the main
languages
that are used in many
nations
.
For example
in Africa Swahili is spoken by many African countries,
hence
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am of opinion that it should be taught in schools at
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level just for communication. French, Germany,
portuguise
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Portuguese
and English should
also
be taught from the lowest grade to high school,
then
at tertiary students can choose which of the
languages
do they want to
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pursue
peruse
. My biological sister did french in high school a couple of years back,
then
at
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she did not
persue
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pursue
it
becasuse
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because
she did not see the need for it though she passed it with flying
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. She did her degree in law, when she completed there was a post
adertised
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advertised
by United
Nations
in their law firm and one of the requirements was knowledge of French, she applied for the post and she was shortlisted for an interview and she was appointed for the post, that was the greatest
opportunity
of a
life time
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, she is still working for United
Nations
and her life changed dramatically. Not only should being
multibilingual
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multilingual
be limited to
traveling
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travelling
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or working in another country
,
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but
its
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it's
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great
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a great
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opportunity
for
culture
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cultural
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exchange, knowledge and great relationships. In conclusion,
lets
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let's
let us
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learn as many
languages
as we can.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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