Write about the following topic: Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
It is a common belief that many individuals have a tendency to wear fashionable
clothes
has an
negative effect Change the article
a
in
society. Change preposition
on
However
, I firmly believe that these things is
a good thing because it helps Change the verb form
are
people
express their personal identity.
The main cause of people
like to wear fashionable clothes
is that people
want attention from other people
. Fashionable clothes
usually makes
Change the verb form
make
people
easily catching
Wrong verb form
catch
othe
Correct your spelling
other
the
people
's eyes. Famous people
are the one
who generally Correct pronoun usage
ones
wearing
trending Wrong verb form
wear
clothes
and it helps them to be always glamorous in front of the public. However
, not just celebrities want to wearing
trending Change the verb form
wear
clothes
, young generations or even the elder one
Correct pronoun usage
ones
also
want to catching
the attention Change the verb form
catch
from
their friends. Almost Change preposition
of
people
who
do not Correct pronoun usage
apply
wearing
fashionable Change the verb form
wear
clothes
because they do not know how to styling
their looks, not because they do not want. According to a Change the form of the verb
style
reccent
survey, 90 Correct your spelling
recent
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
responder
answered that they wear fashionable Replace the word
respondents
clothes
to be more vibrant in front of everyone. But when they at
home or alone, Add a missing verb
are at
people
who wearing
trending looks decline Wrong verb form
wear
to
5 Change preposition
by
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
demonstrate
how appearance in public places Wrong verb form
demonstrating
are
important to a person.
Overall, I think that Change the verb form
is
this
is a good thing because people
have their own right to express their personal identity
. A look of a Fix the agreement mistake
identities
people
generally shows their characteristics. In addition
, showing how they treat to
other Change preposition
apply
people
. This
is a good thing because individuals have chance
to express their characteristics in an undirectly way. A study in the USA has research Correct article usage
a chance
in
a group of Change preposition
on
people
that usually wearing
fashionable Wrong verb form
wear
clothes
why they wear in that way. 95 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
chose that because they want the
others Correct article usage
apply
know
more about their personality, which is a really high figure in a normal survey.
To sum up, it is clear that Add the particle
to know
people
wear fashionable clothes
to catching
attention. Wrong verb form
catch
However
, it is evident that this things
Change the determiner
this thing
these things
is
good for the community because they have their own right to express their personal identity.Change the verb form
are
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