in the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will able to read everything, they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is increasing advancement in technologies, which
make
able to read online without payments. It is believed that published books and newspapers will vanish eventually. I partially agree with Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
this
statement and consider, modern
applications are flexibly comfortable anywhere and everywhere in the use of reading, Correct word choice
that modern
however
, the intellectual properties of publishers will be violated.
Firstly
, nowadays, the public believes that using special applications and searching for reading statements is easier, cheaper and faster rather than buying with expensive sales percentages, wasting time commuting at
bookshops and looking for specific publishes. Change preposition
to
In other words
, book apps and 'Google' searcher
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searchers
saves
readers' time and are suitable for individuals' preferences freely. Change the verb form
save
For example
, in Kazakhstan, the community read information from 'Tengrinews', 'Nur
.KZ' using mobiles and computers staying at home without buying printed ones. Correct word choice
and 'Nur
Therefore
, reading online free news and literature releases time for other important daily duties and remains cash.
From another point of view, freely published records and news violates writers' and journalists' intellectual properties. To put it simply, the desire to write highly professional
qualified materials decreases because society underestimates writing labour and the value of data read online, Change the word
professionally
moreover
, compensations become less. For instance
,the masters of arts in literature do not see any benefits from writing laborious books without payment. That is
why it is one of the drawbacks of reading free information on the Internet.
In conclusion, it is considered that the population will choose to read online literature and publishings without expenditures on them and printed ones will disappear in the future. This
essay discusses why I partly support this
argument, instead
of reading 80% of trash information on the Internet, it is better to pay and use valuable sources even it
will cost money to pay.Correct word choice
if it
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