Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money money on other things to benefit the nation . To what extent do you agree or disagree

Exploration is good but not

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space

, I find it

unneccessary

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unnecessary

and costly. Many governments have a budget for

space

exploration. As in my personal opinion, there are so many things that need the attention of

money

and as a point of view I find it disturbing to learn that millions of dollars are spent each year exploring the

space

,

hence

I would

priotise

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prioritise

using

money

on projects that are more beneficiary to the rest of the people, like giving hundred

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free education to university level, hundred

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free health care to

every one

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including hospital plans and surgeries.

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agree

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using

money

on other things. The

space

has been visited a couple of times

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the days of Neil Armstrong and

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believe because of that, there

hasbeen

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has been

disturbances in the atmosphere causing environmental damage. Effects of global warming in a negative way have been experienced.

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I suspect that because of the negative effects of environmental disturbances that's one of the reasons the world is experiencing unexplainable and uncurable diseases. Some

reserches

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researchers

researches

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that diseases like skin cancers and eye cancers are caused by the

nrgative

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negative

effects of global warming,

hence

I say more

money

should be invested in people's health

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so that those who need Chemotherapy can have direct access to it for free. Major surgeries that are of high

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should

also

be free to its citizens. In conclusion, I say

space

exploring

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should be stopped and that

money

should be diverted for other use.