Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Nowadays, the important problem which the government want to find a solution
is
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the increasing
rate
of the usage of cars in every country. Over the
last
three decades,
people
have had a tendency to purchase and use automobiles increasingly and
that is
why
people
think that now they are facing the difficult issue of having traffic congestion in the community. In
this
essay, I will provide the information to support
this
statement and give some solutions to the problem. In my view, car ownership has increased rapidly. I think that
this
statement is true because now most
people
usually use
this
type of transportation system resulting in causing the traffic jam.
Moreover
, another result of using
this
type of transportation system causes a lot of problems for our community,
such
as increasing carbon in the atmosphere. The increasing
rate
of carbon causes a lot of issues to the environment and other lives due to the fact that carbon is dangerous to human and animal health as well as global warming.
This
is the reason why we have to be concerned about the fast-rising
rate
of owning cars at the moment. According to the measure which the government can adopt
this
policy in order to discourage civilians from using their vehicles, there are some great solutions.
First
, increasing the expenses of parking their vehicles.
Secondly
, giving the privilege to
people
who do not use vehicles,
such
as reducing the cost of living, reducing the tax
rate
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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