You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child Write a letter to the parents.In your letter •explain why you would like the job •give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. •say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter in response to the advertisement published on March 31, 2022, in the Australian times. I moved here in August 2021 and pursuing my master’s in early childhood care at the local university. I have been a part-time babysitter in the city orphanage house for one year.
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is a golden chance for me because it will provide me with a chance to expand my work experience. In my home country, I used to look after my brother since he is 4 years because my parents had to go to work. I really enjoyed it and thought to make babysitting my career and did two years diploma in nanny.
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,my job experience, as well as theoretical knowledge, makes me suitable for the position. I have morning classes and work in a restaurant only on weekends. For the rest of my time, I spend my leisure time in the nearest park where I teach some homeless children. Please give my regards to the family. I am looking forward to receiving your positive response to the letter. Yours faithfully, Sukhwinder
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