Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospitsal. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter -explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital -say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do -give details of when you would be available for this work

#people #work #time #-explain #-say #type #-give

Dear Sir or Madam, After having seen your advertisement regarding free voluntary

work

at the local hospital, I would like to assist the hospital in my leisure. Let me go into more details, I have recently done my master's degree as a psychologist and now I am a part-time employee at the local kindergarten. Helping children, adolescents and adults with their mental issues is my passion.

Besides

, I want to become more professional in the related spare.

That is

why I am interested in doing free

work

at the regional hospital. I would be glad to

work

at the hospital, in the same occupation, without any salary, and support your patients to overcome their fears and be more positive, happy while they are being treated. As I

work

every day from Monday to Wednesday I will be free after 16.00 pm and I am ready to help till 19.00 pm. If you require any other information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully Agapi

Submitted by asatryan.agapi on Thu Mar 31 2022

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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8 paragraphs

166 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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