You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter. • Describe the problem with the equipment • Explain how this problem is affecting your work • Say what you want the shop or company to do

#work #home #piece #equipment #job #shop #company

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

Linking Words

letter to complain about my washing appliance, which I bought from your company

last

Linking Words

year. Recently, our machine broke down as it was under warranty. The apparatus was just stopped working. When we switched on it, the light did not come on. At

first

Linking Words

, we thought there might be a problem with the socket.

However

Linking Words

, we plugged another electronics device into the socket and it worked. I have been washing clothes by hand, which takes lots of time and some attires are not cleaned properly due to my busy schedule.

Moreover

Linking Words

, sometimes I am not able to wash the clothes as I am a working woman so due to the least time my laundry bag is completely full of fabrics. Even, my favourite garbs are sitting in the laundry. I request you to replace my machine or schedule a technician to visit our house and resolve the issue as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Mallika Wadhwa

Submitted by info.rahil on Thu Mar 31 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

162 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
Many drinks and ready meals contain a lot of sugar, salt and other non healthy ingredients. Do you think governments should try and control this development? Give reasons for your answer.
Food additives, including excessive amounts of salt and sugar, are meant to make the food more attractive and tastier, yet it becomes unhealthy. Its frequent consumption causes different chronic diseases including metabolic disorders, pancreatitis, blood pressure problems, and food allergies. As the government is partly responsible for the health of the nation, it may take control over the food producers on the ingredients they use in food. By fining those companies which use monosodium glutamate (E621), and other dangerous food additives in high concentrations, the government may force the others to follow a healthier approach to food preparation.
8
band
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have changed your job describe your new job tell him/her your other news Write at least 150 words
I hope this email finds you in good health and you are doing well. I am writing this letter to inform some information relating to my recent job changes.
7
band
'People who do not use social media networks* will always fall behind in career development opportunities.' To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction?
It is argued that for individuals who do not use social media their career will be reduced in improving at chances. From my perspective, this essay disagrees with the statement, I believe that people who do not use digital communication will rise in career chances. Owing to this, social media can be an addiction, in addition, it can be harmful to mental and body.
7
band
Some people believe that a lot of research is a waste of time and money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is an argument that the authority do not need to spend money on scientific research because it is a waste of money. From this author’s perspective, it would be a foolish statement due to the characteristics of unpredictable diseases in the future or expecting enhancements of medication.
<4
band
There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?
In this fast changing world people faces multiple emotional and social problems among which outrage and anger are the concerning ones. I believe there are many social factors attached to the cause which i will discuss in upcomming paragraphs.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many drinks and ready meals contain a lot of sugar, salt and other non healthy ingredients. Do you think governments should try and control this development? Give reasons for your answer.

Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have changed your job describe your new job tell him/her your other news Write at least 150 words

'People who do not use social media networks* will always fall behind in career development opportunities.' To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction?

Some people believe that a lot of research is a waste of time and money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?