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With the rise of e-book cone the decline in paper books. Some people see this is a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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nowadays, many people prefer using an electronic book and it
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 the decrease percentage of printed books used.
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, many benefits of
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using the internet must be accessed for more than five hours a day.
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, many teachers in Indonesia still have a responsibility to bring their references to campus in order to share them .
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, they could discuss the e-book page by page.
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, it impacts eye problems and back pain since they have to focus on the laptop or gadget every day. The major reasons that must be considered are the effectiveness and affordable price to buy an electronic book by using the internet which helps society to get knowledge more and easier than before.
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, many college students at the University of Brawijaya have many assignments regarding medical science and they need to finish them soon. It is not going to be easy for them since the library was restricted during the pandemic.
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, the e-book is the best choice for them, particularly in the middle of the day
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a clinical study in the hospital.
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 it is a good step, folk need to consider some negative aspects of
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, it contributes to the high level of education and the public should manage the bad impact of
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Provide more specific examples and explanations to support your points and elaborate on the advantages and disadvantages of using e-books versus printed books.
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