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Students learn far more with their teachers than other sources (the internet or television). To extent do you agree or disageree?

#students #teachers #sources #internet #television #disageree
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It is often argued that most student studies more from their teacher at school rather than other materials,
such
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 as the
internet
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 or television. To
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 notion, I completely disagree because of globalization and a lot of educational TV programs that make
students
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 easily search and learn from the
internet
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 or other resources.
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 of all, globalization is happening for the
last
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 few decades worldwide.
This
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 current situation has available for
students
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 from around the world to learn from each other and to find as much as possible information from numerous sources.
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,
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 will search for related materials on the
internet
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 or other platforms. Taking the Youtube channel as an example, people can easily learn new languages from channels that contain language talks or content.
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 why, in order to pandemic situations and globalization, most
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 study more on the
internet
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 or on various websites.
On the other hand
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, television
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 has become another resource for
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 to learn something new. There are so many TV shows that provide new knowledge and experiences, like in science, arts, and social life. As long as there is a parental guide during the time when their children watch TV programs,
students
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 can get benefit from watching it.
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, “Laptop Si Unyil”, one of Indonesia TV’s programs
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 showed about information from various activities or knowledge that can make children get new learning information than what they have got from school. To conclude, I believe nowadays
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 can learn from countless resources either on the
internet
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 or on television as long there is a parental guide during their learning time or a teacher’s guide to explore the knowledge and creativity of the
students
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.

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