Write a letter to a transport office about a problem with the transportation system in your area. • Describe the situation you are facing • Why do you consider it a problem • What change you would like to recommend.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about a problem that we are having in our neighbourhood, because of a lack of bus stops. Every morning I have to walk a long distance to board a public transport vehicle to reach my office.

This

means that I have to wake up early in the morning to be on time for my job because the bus stop is about two kilometres far from my street. Due to the long-distance, I have to spend more time travelling to and from my office than I need to.

As a result

, I don't get adequate rest and free moments to accomplish household chores and spend time with my children. In order to fix

this

problem, I request you to establish at least two bus stops 250 meters from my street.

This

will really help people in our neighbourhood. I hope to hear from you soon about the measures you are taking to address

this

problem.

Also

, I am willing to offer any other information that you need about

this

issue. Yours sincerely, Atiq Azizi

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

185 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to a transport office about a problem with the transportation system in your area. • Describe the situation you are facing • Why do you consider it a problem • What change you would like to recommend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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Theme: In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.

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