Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their car?

Ownning
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Owning
a private car has been viewed as a norm for years, which was resulted in
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conversion
conversation
convertion
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the convertion
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of streets to car
parkings
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parks
parking
that are holding up drivers in
traffic
for hours. I believe that
this
phenomenon is
one
of the most important problems that big cities are dealing with.
However
, a great number of
solutions
are being suggested by experts. The following essay will overlook the reasons that support my idea and will be proceeding with some
solutions
.
To begin
, the rapid increase of private vehicles and the subsequent
traffic
are
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rooted in human nature.
Firstly
, mankind likes convenience and once they experience it, avoidance of it would be impossible for them.
For example
, if the young generation commute
by
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in
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their personal cars and feel its freedom , they will not accept to use the
crowded
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and scheduled public transportation anymore.
Consequently
, every household has more than
one
car nowadays, which
are
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is
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usually being
droven
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driven
by only
one
passenger.
Moreover
, human is a clever creature, who always finds a better way to reach their destinations. To illustrates, they try to find a new way with a lower
traffic
concentration, which helps for a while but gradually gets crowded because of the inappropriate cities streets' design.
Thus
, the
traffic
will
destribute
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distribute
to each street around the towns, and those places become like
a colossal parking areas
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a colossal parking area
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. Despite the above-said reasons being irrefutable, the
solutions
are feasible.
One
of the practical
solutions
is for the government to provide
a
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public transportation that
compete
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with private cars.
Although
it seems implausible, people might be tempted to return to those means by a reasonable fee and providing modern vehicles.
Furthermore
, most of those towns require new
design
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designs
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that would be compatible with their new inquiries.
For instance
, modifying old streets to improve their capacities will solve
this
issue.
Therefore
, cars will not
stuck
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be stuck
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in the narrow avenues and
traffic
will decrease. To sum up, the considerable growth of four-wheel vehicles and the
traffic
jams over recent years
have
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become a difficult challenge for humans. I believe that human's tendency to convenience and their ability to solve a problem based on their benefits for a short period have resulted in it, and improvement of public transportation and cities' street design will solve it.
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