Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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that it is more comfortable, faster and, by far, easier than considering all special situations. If there are
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for all typical
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more information about
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they are not likely
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a
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people who want to
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the rule.
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system of low. To illustrate, there are lots of
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do not have time to solve each
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that each
crime
has special circumstances and
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approach
also
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such
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innocent
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and decisions
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more
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. To illustrate, in case
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commit a new type of
crime
and fixed or coded laws do not have any
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a mistaken decision.
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if there is a flexible law circle court could
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all features and
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circumstances
of
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and
then
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reckon about final punishment. As well as
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it possible to find the
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to all
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of cases. In conclusion, I believe that both
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approaches
have their own advantages and disadvantages,
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method is more appropriate for more countries because it is
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faster and easier to
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punishment for
person
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the person
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who
commited
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committed
a
crime
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