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The best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#cost #fuel #cars #vehicles
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Just as society continues to evolve, opinions regarding immense
pollution
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 have
also
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 changed over time.
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, a fair amount of
people
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 believes, to reduce
pollution
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 government should put some extra taxes on
fuel
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 so
people
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 can minimize their unnecessary use. I do not accord with the former view because there are many effective ways to reduce environmental causes. To Embark with, there are many reasons why excessive
fuel
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 cost is not a proper way to deal with
pollution
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 issues. The most potential reason is having a bike and car has become the primary need of everybody.
People
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 whether from poor or rich backgrounds all are using their own modes of
transportation
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 for their convenience.
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, increasing the
price
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 of
fuel
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 might put them big dilemma, and later on, they have to sacrifice their basic necessity. The point is
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 reinforced by the well-reputed newspaper, in 2021, India has been increased by 20-25%
fuel
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price
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 and that ended up with
people
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 are now suffering from
transportation
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 because even government did not make any changes to public
transportation
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 as well.
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, there is a lot to do to reduce
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instead
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 of
price
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 changes. Government should implement public
transportation
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 by putting some new routes and buses so
people
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 can start using them.
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, the authority should spread awareness of the benefits of using public modes of
transportation
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 among
people
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. And that will end up with less environmental damage. I think these are effective ways
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 of
price
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 up. To conclude, I am totally against with topic given above.
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 is because
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 is not fair to poor consumers and there are many better ways to deal with it.
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