Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or nagative development?
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persons
interact with any other has changed because of Replace the word
people
technology
. In many different ways the
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apply
technology
effect on
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apply
the
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apply
humans
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human's
humans'
relationships
. They are many
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much
nagative
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negative
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in a positive way for communication. For example
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next
moment he called his friend and easily communicate with his friend and tell him is problem
so that's the Add an article
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postive
impact of the Correct your spelling
positive
technology
and affected our relationships
. In added
some types of Replace the word
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emergencies
in
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into
technology
helped you at that time
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example
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the COVID
time
you called number 108 emergency ambulance van came in
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to
us
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apply
father
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father's
technology
positive impact on this
generation and help
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helps
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build
relationships
.
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negative
effect
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effects
on
our Change preposition
of
technology
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by
the
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relationships
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of your
habbits
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habits
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example you are a belong to a Change the article
an
middle class
family so you are working person all the Add a hyphen
middle-class
days
but the weekend Fix the agreement mistake
day
time
spend out with your family but this
current generation is using a smart phone
in Correct your spelling
smartphone
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your
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apply
movie
,
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movies
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relation
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relationship
his
family so it's a very Correct pronoun usage
their
nagtive
impact Correct your spelling
negative
for
our Change preposition
on
technology
. Technology
is not connected to anyone so also
a preset a physically but not mentally present that's why technology
affected our relationships
. Furthermore
, you belong to a working person so also
hesitate with this
technology
because in working time
only using this
Technology
after finish your job go to your house you are also
frustrated so you are go
to the bed not a spend Change the verb form
are going
time
with your family, friends and colleagues in this
way technology
effect
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affect
relationships
.
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the
time
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points
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negative
point
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technology
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spend
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to spend
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build
relationships
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