Some people say that in all levels of education, from the primary schools to universities, too much time is spend on learning facts and not enough on learning practiacal skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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debate on what subjects

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primary

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and not enough on learning

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require

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to memorise the study content

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of thinking critically. What's more, the

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would not benefit

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the subject as their major or career. It is possible for them to forget and never retrieve

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tend not to put

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into an important position, because they will not benefit

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academically.

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opened the courses of cooking, horticulture that can help

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with their

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, those lessons are important for

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. After graduation, they can be independent in university or in real life. In

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, they can learn how to work with others and improve their social

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, which are always important. In

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on learning

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but not on

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practical

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should put more focus on learning

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because they can benefit the

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in the future.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

rote memorization
practical skills
adaptable skills
critical thinking
balanced approach
problem-solving
decision-making
workforce readiness
real-life challenges
technological advancements
information management
creativity hindrance
lifelong learning
skill development

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