Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

Citizens are exposed to a

society

with advertising. In my opinion, it encourages us especially to consume without thinking and young people especially need protection from it.

Consumers

are encouraged to spend money on what they do not need.

Advertisements

manipulate people by employing glamorous, successful people.

Then

the employed

celebrates

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use

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the

products

they are endorsing,

for instance

, they attend TV programs wearing the newest clothes, in order to lead the latest trend and

this

is so persuasive that

consumers

will buy the

products

while

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they actually do not require.

Moreover

,the citizens are always sold

products

without awareness.

For example

,when they watch a football match, the billboards surrounding the pitch sell the

products

they are advertising and if you watch a blockbuster , you very probably see

products

placed throughout the film.It means that

consumers

are influenced even when they are relaxing.

Advertisements

bridge

consumers

and manufacturers and it informs

consumers

what choices they have, but it does not mean

advertisements

should not be regulated, the

consumers

,

in particular

,

young

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the young

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generation need protection

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from

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form

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from

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society

and family. Above all, alcohol

products

should display that juveniles can not buy and tobacco

advertisements

must be banned.The

products

aim

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at

young

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the young

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generation must be censored strictly, and they must display specific usages and harm.

On the other hand

, parents should protect their children from exposing to advertising

such

as the newest i-phone,it is not necessary to buy the newest i-phone only for the newest trend but the young is seduced easily, without the protection

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from

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form

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from

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their parents, they will

lost

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lose

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themselves in the commercial

society

. In conclusion, we are influenced by

advertisements

throughout

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apply

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all time and everywhere.

The

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society

and

family

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families

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must reduce the young generation’s exposure to advertising.