Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in world. Other say that economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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The people are divided into two parts,one who opines that economic

growth

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is the main point to decline in the poverty rate and another are those who think that these developments should

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because it destroying the environment,so badly. But according to

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both views have their own importance, we

can-not

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can not

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stop the

development

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because

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is our need but we

also

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have to think about

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nature too. Both

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sides are discussed in the following paragraphs.

First

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all

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if we talk about

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economic

development

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this

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the

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part of our needing cycle. The economy of the

country

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is a far wide concept

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then

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our thinking. To illustrate, it includes GDP,

infrustructure

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infrastructure

employments

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employment

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foreign

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and foreign

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exchange. All these factors

combinelly

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combine

combined

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economic structure of a

country

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. Economic

growth

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means

increasing

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an increasing

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rate in GDP,

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development

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opportunities, all

these

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components decide the per capita income of the

country

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. So if a

country

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wants to reduce the poverty

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between its

boundry

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boundary

lines,

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the

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economic

development

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will be on the top Apart from

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,if we look at the darker side of

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economic

growth

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, all the things which are created by

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humans

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has

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its

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own advantages and drawbacks. As mentioned above the main components of the economy,GDP rates ,

employment

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and employment

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rate will increase by

satteling

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settling

setting

new industries,which is the main cause of the pollution. The industries harming the air , water, soil and many other natural resources. For

infrustructure

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infrastructure

development

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, people cutting

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trees, destroying the

cultivative

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cultivated

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lands and buses,

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and trains

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are affecting the air,

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producing

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noise pollution. In the end, a

country

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can not survive without economic

growth

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, but it

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can-not live for a long time, by

exploting

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exploiting

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own natural resources. So there must be a balanced

development

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,by taking full consideration of the natural environment.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in world. Other say that economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Your opinion

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Many parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. To what extent do you agree ?

You work in an international company. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter:  explain why you need this time off  give details of when you want this time off  say who can do your work when you are away

Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?