Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in world. Other say that economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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The people are divided into two parts,one who opines that economic
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is the main point to decline in the poverty rate and another thinks that these developments should be stopped because it destroying the environment,so badly. But according to ,me both views have their own importance, we can not stop the
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because
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is our need but we
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have to think about nature too. Both sides are discussed in the following paragraphs.
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of ,all if we talk about economic
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,
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is part of our needing cycle. The economy of the
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is a far wide concept than our thinking. To illustrate, it includes GDP, infrastructure, employment, and foreign exchange. All these factors combine
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and make an economic structure of a
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. Economic
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means an increasing rate in GDP,
development
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of infrastructure, and more employment opportunities, all of these components decide the per capita income of the
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. So if a
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wants to reduce the poverty between its boundary lines,
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economic
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will be on the top Apart from
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,if we look at the darker side of economic
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, all the things which are created by humans, have their own advantages and drawbacks. As mentioned above the main components of the economy,GDP rates , and employment rate will increase by settling new industries,which is the main cause of the pollution. The industries harming the air , water, soil and many other natural resources. For infrastructure
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, people cutting trees, destroying the cultivation lands and buses, and trains are affecting the air,
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producing noise pollution. In the end, a
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can not survive without economic
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, but it
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can-not live for a long time, by exploiting its own natural resources. So there must be a balanced
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,by taking full consideration of the natural environment.
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