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Nowadays more and more people are using smartphones and computers to communicate, so they are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face.

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These days,
people
 tend to use electric devices
such
 as cellphones and
ipads
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pads
iPods
 to catch up with their
friends
. Some
people
 hold that
this
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phenomenon
make
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makes
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 individuals feel difficult
having
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 face-to-face interactions. I believe that
although
 face-to-face talks reduce a
lot
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 opportunities of
face-to-face
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for face-to-face
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 interactions,
people
 can still keep good abilities to
social
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 in reality. On the one hand, sending emails or text messages through mobile phone applications decrease individuals' desire to have face-to-face interactions.
For instance
, employees do not need to wear professional suites anymore since they can talk about businesses with their customers online, which is more convenient and saves lots of money. As a
results
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, their physical talking skills may not be proficient as
the
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 past.
In addition
, some young
people
 have been accustomed to making
friends
 online since they can meet
pople
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people
 all over the world through online video applications
such
 as Facetime.
Therefore
, they may feel
embarassed
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embarrassed
 and do not know how to start a topic when meeting their
friends
 in a physical way.
However
, I believe that the communication abilities won't be online
chattings
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 cannot replace reality
talkings
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talking
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 and
people
 have already raised
the
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apply
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awareness of the shortcomings of online communication.
For example
, some activities
such
 as taking a stroll or having dinner with
friends
 can not be replaced by online meetings.
Therefore
, more and more individuals prefer to have physical activities, which
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