You Recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say:- • Why you moved there • Describe the new apartment • Invite him to visit you.

Hi Bob, It's been a long time since we

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spoke. Hope You & your family doing well. to start with I"m writing to tell you something about my accommodation as you already know that I was living in a hostel near to the campus of my college but owing to copious issues

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as noise and hustle and bustle of my room-mate it increasingly becomes difficult enough to concentrate on my study that's why I relocated to another apartment.

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, I'd like to share with you the location of my current house it's near to the city centre and beside the Italian restaurant and my room is on the 8th floor of the flat and the apartment is quite spacious as well provide a spectacular view of the river.

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, all amenities are available in the residence

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as a kitchenette and elevator, and the hotel and shopping mall is quite nearer within 2

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walking distance.

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, I'm writing to invite you to visit my flat at your convenience time and I knew the most fitting time for you is weekends. so why we should not catch up

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weekend. I'd be pleased if you're visiting my room.

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we"ll go to the cinema that night to watch a movie. Hope to hear from you soon. Take care. Shaban Raza

Shabanraza489

Apr 1, 2022

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A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

223 words

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