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People are surrounded by advertisement which has an increase effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effect of this outweigh the negative effects?

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These days, the amount of advertisements that people see is growing. And it is believed that commercials have
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 impact on us. I do admit
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negative effects, but the positive effects are truly more.
Firstly
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today
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 the most advertising platform is the social network called Instagram,
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popular
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 bloggers tout things or other people daily and thousands and even millions can see them. Because
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individuals mostly follow bloggers whom there are interested in,
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most
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ads
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 are useful for them. The app automatically pushes and shows posts of things depending on
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persons
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 history of researches or other posts
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 likes, thanks to that everyone can find an item they were looking for without wasting a lot of energy.
On the other hand
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quarantee
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guarantee
 that every commercial is useful for individuals. There can be a promotion of not good item,
hence
 people being interested can go buying that and will waste of their money.
In addition
, bloggers
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 glamorize some
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 and they can even not
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try its service,
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 clients who come to
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 can face
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bad service and make their health worse. In conclusion, individuals cannot run from commercials, they will face
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them even though
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 bad or good. Mostly they benefit from it, but there can be situations when advertisements
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the
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 negative effect.
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