Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you Agree or disagree

These days how

children

behave has become a common public concern.

This

is why some

people

think that it is essential that juveniles engage in voluntary activities for

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society during their free time and that

this

practice may not only benefit them but

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society at large.

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essay will agree with

this

idea to an extent but

their

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could be some negative aspects to

this

.

First

of all, it is important that youths learn at a young age

on

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how to give a helping hand to the public.

This

is because being handy has a sense of

fulfillment

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and

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everyone

deserves to feel like they are adding value to the

people

around,apart from that caring for

everyone

would become a natural element in them.

For example

, many

people

that have formed organizations like orphanages , nursing homes etc, realized the importance of helping the needy

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when they were younger by providing free services to the public.Performing

this

act encouraged them to choose a career that best motivated them wholeheartedly.

Therefore

children

should be taught how to be nice early in life. Even though volunteering

to

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the nation is satisfactory to

everyone

juveniles should not be lured into doing what does not please them at all because

everyone

is entitled to

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freedom of free will power and

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being forced to do something

may be

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some form of slavery to an extent.

For

instance

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most successful talented

people

in the world mostly give a history of concentrating on what they really loved doing during their childhood and when they grew up that became a reflection of how they managed to succeed in their work.

This

is why it is important that

children

are motivated to put much time

in

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the things that they are comfortable doing and not luring them to do certain activities forcefully. In

conclusion

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I believe to an extent that

children

should engage in servicing the community for free so as to make them feel the sense of being helpful but that they should

also

be given free will power and be at liberty to choose their own paths.