Public celebrations (festivals, national day) are held in some countries. Some people think that they are very expensive and the government should spend money on some other important issues. Do you agree or disagree?

It is well known that the government incurs a lot of expenditure on celebrating various festivals, both national and cultural in a few nations.

Hence

Linking Words

, some believe that it should spend

this

Linking Words

cost on other pressing issues. I strongly agree with

this

Linking Words

and I elaborate on

this

Linking Words

in the ensuing paragraphs. On one hand, the main benefit of government encouraging celebrations is to preserve the culture and tradition of the land, which could be lost and forgotten if not reminded.

Additionally

Linking Words

, it fosters patriotism in the youngsters by reminding them of the national struggle.

For instance

Linking Words

, Indian Independence

day

Capitalize word

Day

show examples

, which is celebrated on the 15th of August, reminds us of the freedom fighters and the dramatic change in the country since

then

Linking Words

.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, public gatherings at these events allow everyone to socialize because they bring and bond many people of different classes and societies together. In stark contrast, the major disadvantage of the festive arrangements is that a huge amount of funds are dedicated to them despite the poor suffering.

Secondly

Linking Words

, it is understood that these events account

to improve

Change preposition

for improving

show examples

neither the status of the low-income groups nor the health condition of ill people. To explain with an example, in developing countries, there are many suffering from chronic diseases and illnesses

while

Linking Words

many are severely poor,

who

Correct word choice

and

show examples

cannot afford to participate in them,

therefore

Linking Words

is less impacting them.

Thirdly

Linking Words

, recognizing the festivals of only majorities in a multi-cultural nation can enrage the minorities.

To conclude

Linking Words

, public celebrations demand huge funds. I think it should spend the amount on other activities that can directly improve the deprived than on festivals.