As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. What are the causes of this trend and what are the effects on society？

Due to the development of society, a significant

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of people prefer to live alone or have a nuclear family. There are certain reasons

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why they want

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trend, and there are some influences

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should be taken into consideration.

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with, it is generally acknowledged by certain

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that having a big

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family

unit causes a financial

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. As the

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of

population

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the population

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over the world

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increased, they suffer from a lack of

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accommodation

, thereby leading to the increment of price of houses.

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,

individuals

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have chosen to live alone or with a small

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of family members to rent a small house which is cheaper than a big one.

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, a survey conducted by the Korean Labour Foundation has revealed that almost 20% of young adults have a

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tendency

to live alone or with their

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spouses

without kids since they cannot deal with priceless houses. As the example clearly illustrates,

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house fee is a key factor in having a nuclear family.

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, there are some problems

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released from

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such

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trend.

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, as the

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of couples decreases, birth rates

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go down.

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, the population of young adults is smaller than that of seniors.

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, recent media in Korea reports that each young adult supports almost three seniors.

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, it is reasonable to point out that it is stressful among

younsters

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youngsters

.

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, some

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who live alone might be neglected. Not only

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small

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families

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of families

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or living alone hard to be helped, but it may

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bring about devasting consequences

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as an emergency. In

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, in Korea, some

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die alone

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and are found a few days later which sounds miserable. In conclusion, as

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matter of the fact that many

individuals

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tend to live alone or with

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number

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of family members in

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contemporary society, the birth rates increasingly decrease and some are neglected in an emergency situation.