Write a letter to a transport office about a problem with the transportation system in your area. • Describe the situation you are facing • Why do you consider it a problem • What change you would like to recommend.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to the common issues regarding public transportation in the south hall area as we are bearing currently and there is a need for improvements to
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a system to combat the problem.
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, I would like to inform you that I am a white-collar worker
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, I have to drive to the office and back home on a routine basis
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, the intersection of Hill and south road is always congested and I have to wait in a long queue for about an hour on a daily basis.
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, owing to the rush hours in the morning and evening I always get late to the office on routine.
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, I persistently missed the morning meeting session and lost plenty of valuable information
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crucial for my career growth.
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, I would like to some suggestions there should be a warden officer at all times to flow the traffic smoothly and swiftly.
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, there is a need to impose a congestion tax in order to avoid extra private vehicles on the road. Please respond at your earliest convenience and take necessary action promptly. Yours Sincerely, Shaban Raza

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