Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Nowadays, there has commonly been a huge amount of argument about whether governments should invest more in railways or roads since both of them have costs and benefits to be considered. Despite we already know the expense we need to construct a railway system will be higher, I still stand in the position to state train transportation is going to be the most significant solution to solve

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essay will demonstrate how it will be beneficial for our society.

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, one of the main motives behind transportation investment is how to make people use public transportation more

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of their private things.

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option would be suitable because it gives a positive impact in reducing people's time on the road by avoiding the crowd.

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, If someone in Bogor City wants to go to Jakarta in the morning. approximately they will spend for 2 hours while it may be reduced to 1 hour by using

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line.

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, the stakeholder really has to consider the comforts inside of it since that was one of the crucial

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to make

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sustainable solution. The

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perspective is how railways may reduce carbon emissions. As we already know, Car and other road automotives use fuel oil resulting increment

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emissions. By decreasing the number of fuel automotive usage, it is going to lower the amount of air pollution. As

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illustration, The rate of carbon in Jakarta

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reduced after the lockdown policy had been issued. As long as

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car transition is still so far away,

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it might be one of the most feasible

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for

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better air

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. In summary, The bright sides that society might get from railways investment are not only for traffic points itself but

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affect in other critical aspects

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as

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, governments should accommodate by creating policies to make

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investment sooner. They

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need to consider overseas investors to help

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implementation since

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type of expenditure may chunk the national budget a lot.