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The maps show two different plans designed for a conference room.

The maps show two different plans designed for a conference room.
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The given
two
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plans
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 are designed for a conference
room
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 by
two
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 different blueprints.
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,
they
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it
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 can be
oserved
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observed
served
 that
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two
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the two
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 designs have really the same infracture for the
room
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 but the arrangement in
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two
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the two
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 designs
are
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is
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 quite different. We can see that
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plan
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Plan
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B
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 doesn't have
podium
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a podium
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 like
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plan
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Plan
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 A and there are
also
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 more chairs
than
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in
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plan
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Plan
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B
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 than
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in plan
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plan
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Plan
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 A. The first similarity
of
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between
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two
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the two
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 planes is the entrance of the conference
room
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 in the upper right
corner
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. The
working-positions
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working positions
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 are arranged in a quite similar U-shape
faced
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facing
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 upward. The whiteboard of
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two
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the two
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 designs is upper and middle.
However
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, in
plan
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 A it is slightly nearer the entrance than in
plan
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B
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 and in the
B
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 outline it has a seat and a table for
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the presentator
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presentator
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presenter
. There are
also
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 some
difference
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differences
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 between the
two
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 diagrams. The seats for workers of
the
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apply
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plan
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 A faced inward and there are just chairs
in
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on
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one
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 side of the long
tables
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 really different from
the
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apply
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plan
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B
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 which have seats
in
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on
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two
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 side of the worktables. The morning tea
of
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in
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plan
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 A is in the middle at the lower edge but in
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design,
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design
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Design
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B
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 is at the northwest
corner
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 edge of the
room
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 and the style of morning tea in
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two
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the two
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plans
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 is
also
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 different. In
plan
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 A there is a podium for the
presentator
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presentation
 at
northwest
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the northwest
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corner
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, near the whiteboard. Quang Minh Phạm Quang Minh Dạ vâng ạ Tranng Phuonng Tranng The given blueprints
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two
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are two
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 different
plans
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 designed for a conference
room
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. The first similarity between
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two
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the two
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plans
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 is in
ít
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the
 entrace which is
on
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in
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 the top right-hand
corner
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 of the
room
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. In
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plan
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Plan
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 A’s
design
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,
while
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 morning tea is served at the back of the
room
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 behind the
tables
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, it can be found in
one
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corner
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 of the
room
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 in the layout in
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plan
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Plan
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B
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.
Addition
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In addition
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, there is
one
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white board
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whiteboard
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 placed in front of the
tables
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together with
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presenter’s
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the presenter’s
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 chair in
plan
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 A’s
design
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.
Besides
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, in
plan
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B
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, it has
one
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white board
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whiteboard
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puts
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put
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 behind the chair of the presenter. It can be seen that three
tables
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 of
plan
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 A are placed next to each other in the middle of the
room
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 forming U-shaped. It can
see
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be seen
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 easily that the capacity of
room
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B
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 is more than A. In
plan
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 A’s
design
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, the direction of the person sitting is inward.
Podium’s
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The podium’s
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 position in
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plan
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Plan
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 A is in the left
corner
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pf
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of
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 the
room
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 next to
thw
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the
 whiteboard,
while
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 there is no podium in
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plan
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Plan
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B
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’s
design
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, plans, room, plan, b, corner, one, tables, design with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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