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In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house they live In. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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People are now becoming interested in knowing the historical background of the house they live in some countries.
This
 essay will examine the main reason for the interest and how people can research to know the
history
. The two main reasons why humans are becoming interested are because of issues that relate to preservation and cases of stolen properties. Recently, security has become a major issue in every society and individuals have taken it upon themselves to know how good the security in an area is before living there or even while living there in other to know safety measures to keep themselves and family safe.
For instance
, a newly wedded couple
that is
 new to a particular environment and is living in their
first
 home as a couple will likely be interested in knowing if there is a security threat in the house Where they live in other to be more careful or change apartment if need be. The other reason will be issues of theft and stolen properties which are more rampant among building owners.
For example
, there are issues whereby occupants of residence are told to move out because the house they live in was stolen property and the real owner is back to take full possession.
Such
 situations like
this
 are reasons why people research the
history
 of the places they live in to prevent successful occurrences from occurring .
On the other hand
, some possible ways
this
 research can be done is by gathering information from the police in
such
 an area and asking neighbours that have lived there for a long time about the
history
 of the residence. The best and most convenient way of getting information about a place is by going to the police station for adequate details . The law enforcement custody in an environment has every report on an incident that happened in every home in an environment so there are in the best position to know if there has even been a safety threat or any
history
 of theft in an apartment or not.
For example
, when I moved into my new apartment I had to do a polo check to be sure I moved to a good place.Moreso, asking neighbours that have been living long enough can be of good help. They are likely to know a little past of the place they live in and
this
 will give an individual adequate knowledge they need. In conclusion, care threats and past
history
 of theft are likely to influence humans to want to know about the past of where they live in.
However
 ,
this
 can be known by asking the police and neighbours for adequate information.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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