Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In Asia, Europe,
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America, many countries are facing a series of difficulties ranging from
population
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,
politics
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and politics
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to
environment
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the environment
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, and
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is not an exceptional case. In the following, I will discuss
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the challenges
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will face and how to deal with
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. In the
next
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decade, my country,
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, will at least face three challenges:
air
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pollution
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, the
aging
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population
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, and political
conflict
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.
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, over 60% of the
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supply comes from burning fossil fuels, which causes serious
air
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pollution
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by releasing a large number of toxic substances.
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, more and more people have suffered from respiratory diseases.
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, since the cost of having a child keeps increasing, many young couples do not intend to have a baby, causing a low birth rate.
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, future society will lack a working force as elders become the major part of the
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.
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, some Taiwanese are immigrants from China who wish
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would return to China, while others are locals who wish
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to be an independent country. The
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has been enlarged due to the tension between the current China and
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leaders.
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, the Taiwanese cannot form a solid community to endorse the country's development. I suggest the following methods to the
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government
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to address the issues.
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with, the
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should develop sustainable
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,
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as solar
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and wind
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, to reduce
air
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pollution
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.
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, the
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should provide medical and educational allowances to young couples to ease their life pressure, encouraging them to have babies.
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, the
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should organize official meetings for citizens from different political stances to enhance communication, allowing them to understand each other and reduce
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. In conclusion, I indicate that
Taiwan
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will counter the challenges of
air
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pollution
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,
aging
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population
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, and political
conflict
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and propose three suggestions to resolve the problems, respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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