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The given two pie charts depict the
selling
of five distinct goods in the markets in Canada from 2005 to 2010.
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appliance
were 35% which was highly purchased of these gadgets in Fix the agreement mistake
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furnishings had been bought by Change preposition
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Canadian citizen in the initial Correct article usage
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year
.
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Further
pie charts collate that the percentage of food & beverage sales was 22% and 32% in 2005 and 2010. Linking Words
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last
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in
second
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year
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