Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?

Nowadays many families push their children to have extra hours of jobs in their leisure time.I believe
this
is a good way.There are Both merits and demerits are elaborated
further
.
To begin
with, if younger enter in job environment early they will able to know how their parents do hard-
work
,they will know how money is important for daily needs.
Also
, able to become a good employee along with a manager.There are many jobs available for teenagers ,
for example
, most American teenagers do
work
part-time selling a Newspaper or in a restaurant
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during their studies.
Furthermore
, they can develop some lifelong skills like verbal skills,fulfilment as well as communication skill,regarding these types of skills children will prepare for a future.
Thus
,if they
work
as salesmen they have to communicate with various people,though it can remove their speech fear.
On the other hand
,
also
it has some disadvantages,out of all the foremost one is it can be affected on the
result
.To explain it, with school
life
and office
life
at the same time pupil might be tired and cannot focus on school lecture and it has chances to get the low
result
in exam.
Also
can lead become them sick. Because
everyone
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not capable of
this
type of struggle.
For instance
,the survey has revealed that student who does
work
as well as study at the same time
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a 70% of chances to get a bad
result
in school.
Moreover
, they will not enjoy their
childhood
.
Childhood
is the best part of our lives,regarding the job they will not able to make beautiful memories of
childhood
.
Hence
, the student should enjoy their
childhood
life
instead
of early
work
. In conclusion, it is true that early
work
has some demerits like
result
issues.But I believe that a part-time job is the only way that pupils can learn real struggling in
life
.
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  • responsibility
  • punctuality
  • work ethic
  • financial literacy
  • budgeting
  • time management
  • work experience
  • career prospects
  • independence
  • self-esteem
  • communication
  • interpersonal skills
  • academic responsibilities
  • school performance
  • hobbies
  • relaxation
  • well-being
  • stress
  • fatigue
  • premature adulthood
  • childhood experiences
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