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Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise. However, people are walking less on a daily basis. What has made it happen and how to deal with this?

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Many
people
 believe that walking is the best activity but
people
 these days were walking less and less. I believe the advancement of public transportation and
people
's job preferences are the reason behind it.
Therefore
, I have the solution for
this
problem
 so
people
 can live
healthy
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life
. The
first
problem
 is public transport is evolving every year.
Although
, it makes
people
's
life
 easier to go to different places by doing so
people
 tend to forget that by walking you doing
exercise
 unconsciously.
Second
, in today's world, many
people
 prefer to work as white-collar rather than blue-collar because
people
 who do their work with strength are not appreciated enough.
People
 who use strength for their
labor
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 need to realize that while doing their job, they simply do
exercise
such
 as lifting weight. The solution to
this
problem
 is we need to raise the salary of
people
 who do their job with their bodies because they need strength to earn money. While for the other
problem
, I have a suggestion that
people
 can buy a ticket for public transport by doing a simple
exercise
.
This
 idea has been implemented by the Russian government to make their
people
 have a healthy
life
. In Russia,
people
 can get a free train ticket by doing squats or jumping jacks. In conclusion, we need to raise
people
's awareness to do
exercise
 that leads to a healthy
life
, we can simply offer them solutions
such
 as walking or cycling to go to their office.
People
 who live healthily live longer than
people
 who don't.
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