Education should be accessible to people of all economic background all level of education from primary school to tertiary education should be free. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In
this
modren
world, Correct your spelling
modern
education
has become Correct your spelling
major
majaor
part of humans life as well as Correct article usage
a majaor
play
Wrong verb form
playing
incredible
role. According to some Correct article usage
an incredible
individuals
Add a comma
,individuals
education
should be free for all type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
people
from primary school to till higher education
. I have a particaly
view regarding Correct your spelling
partially
particular
this
statement which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs with suitable examples.
Beginning with the factors which
justify that why Correct pronoun usage
apply
why
Remove the redundancy
apply
education
should be free for people
, firstly
, some level of education
provide
proper equality in society between Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
human's
. To explain it, with the help of Change the noun form
humans
human
education
the mentality level will be grow
among Change the verb form
grow
people
. Meanwhile, education
provide
Change the verb form
provides
better
future, educated Correct article usage
a better
people
easily better get job Opportunities with the help of job
they can get sufficient income which Correct article usage
a job
increase
the living standard of Change the verb form
increases
people
. Moreover
, when education
will be free in society, so Add an article
the education
people
can easily do study and provide shining
future . Correct article usage
a shining
The
Japan, Correct article usage
apply
for example
, it
is a top rank country from all countries Correct pronoun usage
apply
who
have Correct pronoun usage
that
best
employees cause of free Correct article usage
the best
education
.
On the other hand
, for
providing free Change preposition
apply
education
funds are
too important. To explain it, if government provide free Correct subject-verb agreement
is
education
they can not get income in future from study funds. Because facilities always needs
funds which Change the verb form
need
is
important for Change the verb form
are
education
development. Moreover
, if government organize free education
it put negative
impact on Add an article
a negative
the negative
Correct your spelling
financial
finicial
budget. Correct article usage
the finicial
Which
can make Correct pronoun usage
This
positive
point of Add an article
a positive
low
economy of Add an article
the low
country
. Add an article
the country
a country
For example
, in Pakistan they
provide free Correct pronoun usage
apply
education
for their people
, so that's why Add an article
the economy
economy
level of Pakistan is low rather than Replace the word
economic
anothor
countries. Correct your spelling
another
other
Hence
, these are the negative outcomes which make them disagree regarding this
statemwnt
.
To sum up, Correct your spelling
statement
Although
, there are lot
of Correct article usage
a lot
benifits
regarding free Correct your spelling
benefits
of
cost Change preposition
apply
education
but
we can not ignore the drawbacks of free Remove the conjunction
apply
education
which put negative
impact on Add an article
a negative
the negative
Add an article
the country
country
economy.Change noun form
country's
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