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You are going to holiday abroad on holiday and your friend will stay in your home while you are away. Explain where you hide the keys. describe what your friend needs to do in your absence. say when you are coming back

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Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well. Thanks for agreeing to look after my house
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 month. As I told you
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 week, my plans for the summer
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 month are finalised. You know how excited I am to go to Bali! It was impossible without you agreeing to look after my house and my lovely puppies when I will be on vacation. Big thanks in advance. I just want to let you know that my house has just been renovated. Since you haven’t been to my place for a couple of months, you should use the stairs
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 to the garage
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 of using the main entrance door. The ground floor is not accessible for maintenance reasons. I need to mention a couple of tasks you need to look after during my absence.
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, my dogs stay on the top floor, and I will be very grateful if you can feed them every day.
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, ensure to pump the water in the tank every morning as construction workers would need it early morning. Thank you once again for your help., See you soon. Rahul
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