You are going for a one week vacation and your friend agreed to stay at your place while you are away. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter you should: thank him/her and tell the dates of your holiday explain how he/she enters the house describe what you expect him/her to do

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Dear Anny, Thank you so much for your offer to spend time at my house when I'll go back to my country to

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my parent.I'd like to let you know that my holiday will be on 10-17 of March as

week.Hope you will be fine with

this

schedule.

Firstly

,I would like to tell you how to enter my place.It's a little misery but not hard. When you arrive here,you will face my trees which in front of my house's door and turn right will have some bottle of sand has placed.Please take it is away and you will see my key under it.

In addition

, Could you do me a favour? It will be kind of you.If you can help me water my trees because they are kind of plants which has to be

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every day. Hope you are happy and enjoy yourself when you stay here. Warm wishes, Maya

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

153 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are going for a one week vacation and your friend agreed to stay at your place while you are away. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter you should: thank him/her and tell the dates of your holiday explain how he/she enters the house describe what you expect him/her to do

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