Write a letter to Professor Hristo Pimpirev, Head of the Bulgarian Antarctic expedition who has just returned to Bulgaria from the South Pole. Invite him to talk to your class about the latest Antarctic Expedition

Dear Professor Pimpirev, I am writing to invite you to our special class, which
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once a month. We would be
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if you be part of our day. The students know about you from the news and will be very excited when they understand that you may come to tell them about your experience. They are very interested in your participation in the South Pole Expedition. The questions should be about the conditions there, your decision, have
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studied somewhere. You can join us on
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of June at
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Hristo Toprakchiev school at 10
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7 Yours sincerely,
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