Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: describe the jacket describe where you were seated explain what you want to be done

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am

Alphones

Correct your spelling

Alphonse

Tharshikan, and I am writing to let you know that I have left my jacket after

last

night

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show. I am a regular customer of your cinema and yesterday I went to a night movie with my college friends. The jacket is brown in colour and is made of pure leather with a long arm. It was gifted by my mother for my 25th birthday. I used to wear

this

coat during the winter season. I think one of my pockets has a cardholder and into I kept my UOB bank debit card and a few visiting cards from my new clients. We are seated at screen number 4, Eastside the

last

row of seats and my seat number is E10-14P. I kept my jacket on the left handle but I forgot to bring it back after the movie finished because the ambient temperature is not cold. I hope somebody had found it and handover to your supervisor. I would appreciate it if you can give an update about it. Please let me know your convenient date and time to collect it. You can reach me at 65789851 during office hours. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully,

Alphones

Correct your spelling

Alphonse

Tharshikan.

Submitted by ay on Mon Apr 04 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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for example
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therefore
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although
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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

206 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: describe the jacket describe where you were seated explain what you want to be done

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this developement has more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some believe that traffic problems in cities can best be resolved by investing in urban infrastructure while others feel there are superior solutions. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many countries want to host international sports event, while other countries think that hosting sports events has more problems than benefits.

Some people work for same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.