Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: describe the jacket describe where you were seated explain what you want to be done

Dear Sir or Madam, I am
Alphones
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Alphonse
Tharshikan, and I am writing to let you know that I have left my jacket after
last
night
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show. I am a regular customer of your cinema and yesterday I went to a night movie with my college friends. The jacket is brown in colour and is made of pure leather with a long arm. It was gifted by my mother for my 25th birthday. I used to wear
this
coat during the winter season. I think one of my pockets has a cardholder and into I kept my UOB bank debit card and a few visiting cards from my new clients. We are seated at screen number 4, Eastside the
last
row of seats and my seat number is E10-14P. I kept my jacket on the left handle but I forgot to bring it back after the movie finished because the ambient temperature is not cold. I hope somebody had found it and handover to your supervisor. I would appreciate it if you can give an update about it. Please let me know your convenient date and time to collect it. You can reach me at 65789851 during office hours. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully,
Alphones
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Alphonse
Tharshikan.
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