International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern era, more and more
people
are getting concerned about environmental crises. Even Use synonyms
tourism
is not an exception and there is a controversy about whether tourists benefit local societies or not. Despite causing some Use synonyms
problems
like air pollution, I think visitors benefit their destinations far more than harm them because of the jobs they create and their contribution to the local Use synonyms
economy
.
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tourism
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of impact on the Use synonyms
economy
of natural and historical places. In a historical city in Iran called Shiraz, Use synonyms
for example
, during the pandemic, Linking Words
people
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problems
because of Covid restrictions. As we see, Use synonyms
Tourism
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In addition
, tourists spend a Linking Words
lot
of money in these areas to take a hotel room or buy food and so on which is helpful to the Use synonyms
economy
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this
contribution can outweigh any other drawbacks of the Linking Words
tourism
industry.
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On the other hand
, some groups of Linking Words
community
emphasize the environmental crises caused by visitors. Correct article usage
the community
Such
as the northern beaches of Iran where many habitats of aquatic animals have been destroyed because of abandoned plastics and other things by travellers. Linking Words
Therefore
, travellers can make more garbage and dump it into lakes, seas and jungles. Linking Words
Moreover
, the transportation means used by tourists can release a large quantity of emissions into the air which reduces the quality of life and causes a Linking Words
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problems
for local residents. So, travelling to new places can bring a Use synonyms
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problems
to society.
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tourism
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economy related
issues and some drawbacks like environmental Add a hyphen
economy-related
problems
, as well. I think its advantages fully outweigh its disadvantages and I hope electric vehicles and other devices tackle these Use synonyms
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see
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