The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now

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These diagrams presented the layout of a

sports

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in a university at present and its construction plan

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the future. Overall, the university staff plan to expand

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sports

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center

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and displace those areas which were outdoors courts for indoor facilities. There will

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be a

sports

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shop and cafe close to the entrance.

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, the 25m pool

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, as well as the seating, changing room on the two sides of it,

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changing

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room on the

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sides of it are going to remain unchanged. The gym

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the north edge of

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sports

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will be expanded in size

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about

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now. Outside of the

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, they are outdoor courts at the west and east wings now respectively, a leisure pool is expected to be built on the west side of the changing room, a

sports

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hall and

two

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dance

studio

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will replace the east side outdoor courts and be parts of the indoor facilities. On the

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southwestern

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southeastern

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this

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sports

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center

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two

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changing rooms were built on there. The

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shop is at the left of the entrance which is close to the leisure pool, and

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opposite side is a cafe which is easy to access for students once they enter the entrance.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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205 words

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now

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In some countries fast food restaurants and supermakets give money to schools to promote their products. do you think this is a positive or negative development ?

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