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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now

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These diagrams presented the layout of a
sports
center
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 in a university at present and its construction plan
in
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 the future. Overall, the university staff plan to expand
this
sports
center
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 and displace those areas which were outdoors courts for indoor facilities. There will
also
 be a
sports
 shop and cafe close to the entrance.
Firstly
, the 25m pool
as well as the seating,
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, as well as the seating, changing room on the two sides of it,
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 room on the
two
 sides of it are going to remain unchanged. The gym
in
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 the north edge of
this
sports
center
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 will be expanded in size
for
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about
two
 times
than
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now. Outside of the
sports
center
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, they are outdoor courts at the west and east wings now respectively, a leisure pool is expected to be built on the west side of the changing room, a
sports
 hall and
two
 dance
studio
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studios
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 will replace the east side outdoor courts and be parts of the indoor facilities. On the
southwesten
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southwestern
southwest
 and
southeasten
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southeastern
corner
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 of
this
sports
center
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,
two
 changing rooms were built on there. The
sports
 shop is at the left of the entrance which is close to the leisure pool, and
the
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 opposite side is a cafe which is easy to access for students once they enter the entrance.
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