Some people believe that everyone has aright to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have.

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Universities
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are the
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evolution of
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society.
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, the institution of
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university
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the university
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is responsible for
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, research and technology. Certain individuals are of the opinion that
students
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have the right to higher
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and the
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should allow free
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for all
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regardless of their financial position.l completely agree with
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notion that the institution of
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university
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the university
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should
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all learners for free to reduce
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expenses and spread
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. One of the major
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why
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government
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should accept free enrollment of
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is to decrease their financial burden. Because apart from
tution
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tuition
fees,they are required to pay rent, transport and food.
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an incredible increase in academic expenses.
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, about 80 per cent of
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students
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either from rich or poor families are working
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job
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to raise extra money to pay off
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fees.By allowing free admission of
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universities
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,the
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is helping them financially.
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, if
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admits
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all
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at no cost, more people will be educated.
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, an educated society will mean higher knowledge of research and technology,
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, it will become easier for the
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and citizens to understand and tackle problems affecting the nation.
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,
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student can use their scientific knowledge and technology from
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to
develop
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vaccines in times of pandemics,in order to treat people.
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of
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free
university
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education
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benefit
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the nation. To conclude, despite conflicting views regarding free
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in
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, I believe that
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will give everyone an opportunity to
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and develop,
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more opportunities for authorities to fund
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students
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fees. 260 words
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