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success is depend on hard work but others believe that luck has no role how far do you agree or disagree

#success #work #luck #role
At the present time,
people
 believe that only hardworking
people
 will succeed and there's no place for
luck
. I totally disagree with the rubric above due to the fact that
people
 cannot earn money without
luck
 and with no
luck
people
 won't be able to get a
job
and
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it will be proven in the following essay.
Firstly
, since the dawn of time
people
 believed
to
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luck
,
for example
,
people
 always carry some kind of talismans or chokers. In
the
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Ireland,
people
 believe that green clover will bring them money and
luck
. And the situation has not been changed at the present as well. You can hold a questionnaire and ask strangers "do they believe in
luck
 or not?" I'm sure that 100% of
people
 will say ‘yes’; because
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luck
 is an inalienable part of the life of human beings.
Secondly
, without
luck
people
 won't be able to get even a
job
.
For instance
, when
people
 looking for a
job
, they are searching them
on
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 newspapers and magazines and they don't know what expects
them
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 there, they only rely on
luck
 and
trying
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 to find a suitable
job
 for themselves.
Furthermore
, even at
the
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school sometimes kids are getting their marks by
luck
, which means that teachers sometimes can mix up jobs and mark the student wrong. It's
also
 a clear example of
luck
.
On the other hand
, if
people
 will rely on only
luck
 they will not get anything, truly
luck
 is with us but it helps only when we work hard.
For example
, in difficult situations when
people
 cannot make a choice between something, they are choosing only by their instincts and if they work hard and learn a lot, they know which decision to make, it all comes from experience. After analysing both sides of
this
 issue, I have concluded that despite the hard work,
people
 always need at least
the
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 grain of
luck
 for the successful life
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