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Write a letter to Professor Hristo Pimpirev, Head of the Bulgarian Antarctic expedition who has just returned to Bulgaria from the South Pole. Invite him to talk to your class about the latest Antarctic Expedition

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Dear Professor Pimpirev, I am writing to invite you to come to our class. It would bring us
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great pleasure if you could attend the class meeting and tell us about your latest trip to the South Pole. We would like to discuss with you what is like living there even if it is for short time.
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 did you see something interesting during your expeditions
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 Was it hard for you to partner with others if there were any
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 What were you eating and did you have days off during the expeditions, so you can explore and have a rest. We would appreciate
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 you come
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 the local library. Hoping for your presence on that day. Yours sincerely, Boyan Ivanov
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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