Write a letter to Professor Hristo Pimpirev, Head of the Bulgarian Antarctic expedition who has just returned to Bulgaria from the South Pole. Invite him to talk to your class about the latest Antarctic Expedition

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Dear Professor Pimpirev, I am writing to invite you to come to our class. It would bring us

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great pleasure if you could attend the class meeting and tell us about your latest trip to the South Pole. We would like to discuss with you what is like living there even if it is for short time.

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did you see something interesting during your expeditions

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Was it hard for you to partner with others if there were any

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What were you eating and did you have days off during the expeditions, so you can explore and have a rest. We would appreciate

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the local library. Hoping for your presence on that day. Yours sincerely, Boyan Ivanov

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6 paragraphs

124 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to Professor Hristo Pimpirev, Head of the Bulgarian Antarctic expedition who has just returned to Bulgaria from the South Pole. Invite him to talk to your class about the latest Antarctic Expedition

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