Educaiton should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of educaiton, from primary school to tertiary education, should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

Every individual should

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an equal

opportunity

to access education

irregardless

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of their financial status. From kindergarten to university, the schools must be free of charge.

This

essay will agree

to

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this

opinion because

such

opportunities increase economic growth and reduce

crime

in our society.

To begin

with, every nation's

economy

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growth depends on

tax

collection.

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result

of, equal

opportunity

to

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eduction

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, many people attain tertiary qualifications which they use to find

well paying

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jobs.

Therefore

, some of their income is used to pay

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taxes

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tax

to the government.

For instance

, a Newyork based researcher

,

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proved that skilled workers pay me levy

than

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the unskilled. Thence, the increase in

tax

collected directly improves the economy.

In addition

, Knowledge acquired at

school

enable

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people to become

successfull

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successful

entrepreneurs

as a

result

of data taught in schools.

Therefore

, paying more money to the government as

tax

earned from their business.

Furthermore

, education curbs

crime

in our communities because it provides a source of income

to

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the youths. When children from low

social economic

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backgrounds fail to pay

tutuion

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tuition

fee

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, they end up dropping out of

school

.

This

forces them to resort to a life of

crime

because of

lack

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of money.

Hence

, educating them will provide an

opportunity

to get a better job.

For example

, most thieves are illiterate and do so for money.

Thus

, to reduce

crime

, more people should be able to go to

school

.

Additionally

, scholars make better decisions in life

such

as

,

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financial and health decisions

as a

result

of the knowledge acquired at

school

.

As a

result

, our societies become healthier and richer. To sum up, I completely agree

to

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this

notion because

equal

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opportunity

to

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education results in a better society because citizens are able to make better decisions,

this

also

increases revenue for the country and

reduce

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crime

in our neighbourhood.