Some say that main environmental problems of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. DISCUSS BOTH THE VIEW AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

In the 21st century, some environmentalists mentioned that due to some

extinction

of some

species

of plants and animals resulting main

envinronmental

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environmental

problems.

However

, some parties stressed that there are more crucial environmental problems. In my perspective, I strongly agree with the

second

statement.

Firstly

, the

extinction

of some

species

of animals and plants brings a huge impact

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environmental issues. Each

species

of animal and plant play an important role in the natural food chain system. The loss of certain

species

disrupts the diversified resources of the natural environment.

For example

, the presence of algae. Algae is the main food resource for certain animals

species

and acts as a filter

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mainstream

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. But,

sthe

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the

as the

she

sudden blooming of algae

species

with have a reverse effect and

distrupt

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disrupt

the whole environmental system. Another example

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is the

extinction

of the Himalaya tiger. Himalaya tiger is a carnivore and helps to maintain the number of herbivores in

a certain areas

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,

Extinction

of

this

tiger will cause an increasing number of herbivores.

Secondly

, the more important environmental problem the human race facing currently- global warming. Due to

increased

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exploitation of natural land, the green natural habitat is drastically reduced.

Thus

, the

emition

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emission

emotion

of carbon dioxide (CO2) increases and the transformation of oxygen level is reduced. Increasing CO2 causes global warming. Eventually, melted the iceberg at the north pole

causing

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the sea level to increase.

Therefore

, there are saying that Maldives or Bangkok will soon submerge below sea level in the coming 10 years due to the global warming effect.

As a result

, it will disrupt a nation. In conclusion, I personally think that there are more important environmental problems that need to solve than the

extinction

of a certain

species

.